Music Magazine: Improvements

My Teacher informed me that my front cover, had a lack of writing on it and it needed something more, she also suggested to me that I moved the writing over to the left more because of the way magazines are laid out in newsagents, some important bits of my writing wouldn't be seen and this could affect my magazine. Finally she suggested that I should add a bar at the bottom of my front cover because they are very popular with magazines and it will fill my magazine more.

 

This was my front cover before:

This is my improved front cover: