My teacher Mrs Howlett informed me that my double page spread could be confused for a fashion magazine instead of a music magazine, so I have decided to alter the paragraphs at the top of the pages, this makes the pages relate more to music, however not changing my idea.
My paragraphs used to read:
'Lydia Hutchings new album 'The Truth About Us', available from 20th April 2013'
'Molly Dunlea, lead singer of 'Violence, Bowties and Blazers' their first album 'Ignore This', released 13th March 1967'
They now read:
'Lydia Hutchings new album 'The Truth About Us', available from 20th April 2013. In her new music video of her single 'Fight' she is seen wearing this outfit, you to can have the look.'
'Molly Dunlea, lead singer of 'Violence, Bowties and Blazers' their first album 'Ignore This', released 13th March 1967. In their first live performance of 'Liana' she was seen wearing this outfit, you to can have a similar vintage look of the past artist.'
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